Lay Your Weary Head – Revisited

Originally Posted 2013

Originally created to remind one and all of the 11th day of the 11th Month 2012, the poem was written in a matter of moments and is from the heart – I put no real thought in to it whatsoever. Fast forward to April 2013 and I find myself revisiting ‘Lay Your Weary Head (Old Soldier)’ not to glam it up but to add, modify, enhance what was simply a poem to those that fought on all fronts in all wars. For the poem and a transcript of the narrative, read on.

Narrative: We never asked if we could go, oh no we said we was going and that’s that. I was only 15 but a little changing of dates on the form made me old enough. Alf if memory serves was 15 as well but this was war and they needed all the able-bodied so we was in.
Besides this was adventure, excitement, although the next few years made those dreams of adventure and excitement disappear in to the muddied fields we crawled across, mortars poundin’ the sodden earth, bullets whizzing over are ‘eads, taking great chunks o dreams with ’em.
Many times I said to Alf, ‘what happened to the adventure?’ but he never answered, he couldn’t, he’d been killed 4 days after we landed, dozens had met the same fate — buried in makeshift graves, a few quiet words and we was off again — I wondered if they’d be remembered or would I be if I bought it for that matter.
©Copyright Carl Bratcher 05/04/13 All Rights Reserved.
Lay Your Weary Head (Old Soldier)
Through mud they trudged
As deep as their knees
Thoughts lingered on of families
Many had gone but many stayed In unmarked graves
Were where they laid
From friends a silent prayer was said
Then over the top they went ahead
Bullets cut them down en masse
Some they say should have been in class
Learning English, ‘rithmetic and fun
But battle on, they did as one
Now lay your weary head old soldier
Your battles fought your war is over
No need to remember what you’ve done
Your memories live on in everyone
Lest we forget
© Copyright Carl Bratcher 11/11/11

Write Right or Try To Atleast

Originally Posted 28/1/08
It’s been many a year since I sat and wrote a short story, I was (well still am) a member of an online writers group – it certainly brought the twisted part of me out. Anyway, as I mentioned in my last post, I was going to continue or attempt to write some more of the now five part trilogy 😉 which I did. Vallaror is undergoing some changes, LITERALLY so it’s making for a few challenges, I only managed another 2500+ words before I got stuck last night so I’m all sparky and ready to go again after a night of just letting the old mind drift through scenarios.
I think I’ll shurrup now and go write some more.
Adios

Damn it’s warm today

Originally Posted 27/1/08
Too bloody warm to spend outside so here I am going through the family tree. I started one a long while back but I got sidetracked and it ended up where most things on a computer end up, filed under “F” for “Frow It Away For Another Day.”
Anyhoo, I started again and really got stuck in to it over the last few weeks, apart from that, I’ve thought about beginning writing again e.g. continue the once was a trilogy that is now five parts hmm I wonder if I can have a five part trilogy 🙂 – plus I’m re-organising my book of short stories to include virtually all of them along with combining the separate book into one.
On that note I think I’m going to go and write.
Adios